The difference between my first journal and my second journal

Hi fellas!!
Now i will give you my explaination about the difference between the first journal which i reviewed and the second journal which i reviewed also.
I think the first journal was easier to understand because it has a simple redaction and also a simple vocabulary, but in the first journal i think the writer doesn't use a good structure for write his journal.
Different with the second journal, the writer use a good structure for write his journal, but the vocabulary of the second journal is more complex.

Naahh i think it's enough for my explanation. See you in next blog!!

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